Stainless :

 

Stern voice of these silhouettes lied.
Autumn ,not leafs but splintered feathers.
Like a tumbled life and arose eyes , i meet mortality.
Inimical truth enwreathed by the cracked mirrors , and blood filled the fissured of the palm.

Wait.
Listen, answer me?
Feel the buried dark.

Tried to stand , river lugged back.
Traveling on this endless road with a deception.
Escaped from the turbulence of credence.
Here, a bird set free.

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I write what i see, and feel what i breathe. Poetics is what i bathe in.

28 Comments

  • Cezane September 8, 2016 at 7:38 am Reply

    Wow…
    You really have way with words to express an emotion.

    • sahilbhambri September 8, 2016 at 11:38 am Reply

      Hey , thanks man , glad you liked it.
      God bless😁

  • Billy Mills September 11, 2016 at 5:56 pm Reply

    Thanks for the Like on my blog.

  • Akaluv September 11, 2016 at 6:01 pm Reply

    You have a wonderful way with words =) Thanks so much for liking my poem, “Not me, For I am Small.”

    • sahilbhambri September 11, 2016 at 6:34 pm Reply

      Hey , thanks beautiful human 🙂
      And you are great too

      • Akaluv September 11, 2016 at 8:09 pm Reply

        Aww thank you =)

  • complexlyme September 13, 2016 at 6:33 pm Reply

    buried dark… says too much in itself.

    I ‘wolfed’ down every word… 🙂 you have awesome poetry up here.

    • sahilbhambri September 13, 2016 at 6:37 pm Reply

      Hey , thanks a lot,
      I am really glad to hear that.
      You too are good at it 😁
      God bless 🙂

  • loverhater99 September 17, 2016 at 9:02 pm Reply

    Simply wow.

  • Write Handed Poetry October 26, 2016 at 4:12 pm Reply

    Yes yes yes. Oh I will be following you now.

    • sahilbhambri October 26, 2016 at 4:20 pm Reply

      Haha , glad to hear this. Thanks 🙂

  • Girl with the Glitter October 26, 2016 at 4:19 pm Reply

    It’s beautiful..

  • sanberdooboy November 6, 2016 at 3:38 pm Reply

    some strong images here such as “not leafs but splintered feathers.”and i really like the last line because it is so unexpected.

    • sahilbhambri November 7, 2016 at 11:47 am Reply

      Thanks for your appreciation 🙂
      Gleeful , you liked it.
      God bless 🙂

  • mypoeticjourneysite November 9, 2016 at 4:39 pm Reply

    Impressive..very well expressed..

  • PierceAMarks November 11, 2016 at 3:18 pm Reply

    I like the style a lot! Minimalistic.

    Stay in touch, I want to see how our poems develop over time.

    • sahilbhambri November 12, 2016 at 2:07 pm Reply

      Thanks for appreciation ,
      God bless 🙂

  • Ms.Acwh1's Blog's December 14, 2016 at 10:19 pm Reply

    This is another beautiful poem as well keep up the good work.Anita

  • flujanoconnor January 20, 2017 at 4:54 pm Reply

    Philosophical emotional thoughts.

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