Opaque..

Yet, dolour affirmed the fib,
Perfidiously died in a lap of autumn.
Help, help!
I am alive, seems like already forgotten.

Astrophil urged Stella,
Dirge of angst in a slur,
Wait , wait!
He hung fire for the love of her.

I try, i cry, yes i unfold, i die,
Let the darth befall,
Espy the pang,
Discern the Thanatos’s call.

As immortal as a song of Nightingale,
Every forest hast an anecdote,
Troth of murk,
In every word i wrote.

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I write what i see, and feel what i breathe. Poetics is what i bathe in.

44 Comments

  • Arisha Habib December 12, 2016 at 7:00 pm Reply

    Beautifully written. “I try, I cry, yes I unfold, I die” 😍

  • Forever Femme December 12, 2016 at 7:45 pm Reply

    You had me at “dolour affirmed the fib.” Treat your quill as mighty as it serves you, wonderful wordsmith.

    • Sahil Bhambri December 13, 2016 at 6:15 am Reply

      Your appreciation is so amusing.
      Thank you beautiful soul.
      God bless 🙂

  • Sascha Darlington December 13, 2016 at 6:09 am Reply

    beautiful!

  • sophiaalisaali December 13, 2016 at 4:59 pm Reply

    Awesome poem, loved reading it, your style of writing is pretty epic I must say 👍

    • Sahil Bhambri December 13, 2016 at 6:55 pm Reply

      Thanks sophia,
      Glad you stopped by and read it,
      God bless 🙂

  • Eugenia December 13, 2016 at 5:18 pm Reply

    Superbly written.

  • saniikyle December 14, 2016 at 1:23 am Reply

    Beautifully written and expressed…..seriously loved reading it……..choice words are really amazing…..😊😊

    • Sahil Bhambri December 14, 2016 at 5:21 am Reply

      Thank you beautiful soul,
      Your appreciation means a lot,
      God bless 🙂

  • saniikyle December 14, 2016 at 5:47 am Reply

    My pleasure………keep smiling….😊😊

  • Ms.Acwh1's Blog's December 14, 2016 at 10:17 pm Reply

    Thanks for the reviews of my poems and I love this one it is so beautiful,thanks again God bless Anita

  • Pratz December 15, 2016 at 10:31 am Reply

    “I try, I cry , yes I Unfold , I die ” 😍Chilling!! Your work is pretty amazing.

    • Sahil Bhambri December 15, 2016 at 2:16 pm Reply

      Thank you for your beautiful appreciation.
      God bless 🙂

  • Ohmz December 16, 2016 at 4:57 pm Reply

    Say whaaaa…. You have a very good voice when it comes to glossary of things. Rock on dude, rock on.

    • Sahil Bhambri December 16, 2016 at 5:15 pm Reply

      Thanks a lot dude,
      Really appreciate it man
      God bless 🙂

  • Jeffrey December 16, 2016 at 7:07 pm Reply

    Extraordinary work; both smart and beautiful!

    • Sahil Bhambri December 16, 2016 at 8:39 pm Reply

      Wow, respect your admiration , means a lot
      Thank you
      God bless 🙂

  • ComplexlyMe December 18, 2016 at 2:18 pm Reply

    Spins into rhythm yet with tranquility.

    Utterly beautiful.

    • Sahil Bhambri December 18, 2016 at 6:24 pm Reply

      Thank you beautiful
      You write amusing too,
      God bless 🙂

  • everyoneisanartistblog December 18, 2016 at 6:50 pm Reply

    wow… b-e-a-utiful…..its amazing..

    • Sahil Bhambri December 18, 2016 at 7:49 pm Reply

      Thank you so much,
      You are amazing too,
      God bless 🙂

  • Nikita December 23, 2016 at 3:19 pm Reply

    Every forest has an anecdote 🙂 It noted down these words in my diary..touched.

    • Sahil Bhambri December 24, 2016 at 12:19 am Reply

      Wow, glad to hear that nikita,
      Thank you for showing up your appreciation,
      God bless 🙂

  • akansha1602 December 28, 2016 at 4:30 pm Reply

    Beautiful! Very very well penned.

    • Sahil Bhambri December 28, 2016 at 7:28 pm Reply

      Thank you akansha😊
      You write beautiful too,
      God bless 🙂

  • sanberdooboy December 30, 2016 at 8:55 pm Reply

    i especially like the surprise in the last two lines.

  • MIND BODY SOL January 3, 2017 at 8:06 pm Reply

    Excellent style!

  • Niharika Tanwar January 3, 2017 at 9:37 pm Reply

    Incredible, I must say.

  • Mr Nothing January 11, 2017 at 5:31 am Reply

    Sometimes someone comes your way who makes you realize the astounding capacity of words to express a soul. It is then when overwhelm seizes your spirit and you dance on top of the dots and accents to a phonetic orchestra.
    Your work calls for a book of poetry.
    Thank you for visiting nothingcluelesslost.com

    • Sahil Bhambri January 11, 2017 at 10:30 am Reply

      Thanks for appreciating ,
      I respect your comment,
      You are true there, and i will surely try for a book
      Thanks
      God bless 🙂

  • ItsBond007 January 19, 2017 at 8:03 pm Reply

    OMG, you’re such a great poet, with such an extraordinary style of writing!!
    Keep up the good work!! 😊

    • Sahil Bhambri January 20, 2017 at 5:55 am Reply

      That means a lot,
      Respect that, waking up to this,
      Thanks
      God bless 🙂

  • nightatabora March 1, 2017 at 1:38 pm Reply

    I have been reading out some of your stories and i can claim pretty nice stuff. I will surely bookmark your blog.

    • Sahil Bhambri March 2, 2017 at 8:41 am Reply

      I really respect that appreciation,
      Thank you 🙂
      Glad that you liked my stuff,
      God bless 🙂

  • wildheartwomanblog July 18, 2018 at 4:33 pm Reply

    I love the way you paint with words!

    • Sahil Bhambri July 19, 2018 at 1:50 pm Reply

      I loved the way you appreciated.
      Thanks much (:

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