Dilapidated!

 

Weep, yawp, weep, yawp,
O’ life, o’life, why doth thee exist?
Like a starry sky, where’s the cloudless clime?
In a day i born, in a night i fight.

I may , or might not?
Descry, descry, descry,
Listen to an aphony mumble,
For the dark i pray, for the solitude i stay.

Would thou let me be,
A shoreless sea,
Sleep in a nightmare
For a moon, i flee.

Would thou let me cry,
With a voice of prey,
Sentient in a daymare,
For a moon, i’ll die.

Thou mistaketh me,
Which didst lead me forth,
Beshrew me, if i hast my breath,
Despair i be, let darth findeth me.

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24 Comments

  • smartandpracticalparenting February 1, 2017 at 4:43 pm Reply

    this is a beautiful piece…

  • saniikyle February 1, 2017 at 5:47 pm Reply

    Beautifully penned…… And as always has its own impact on the readers….. And it’s always effective….. Great work sahil…… Keep writing like this and yeah be happy and keep smiling…… 😃😃

    • Sahil Bhambri February 1, 2017 at 5:55 pm Reply

      As beautiful as your comment,
      Thank you, really means a lot , your appreciation,
      God bless, :
      Keep smiling 🙂

      • saniikyle February 1, 2017 at 5:57 pm Reply

        Pleasure is all mine…… And thanks….. You too be happy and stay blessed….. Keep smiling…. 😃😃

  • Sylvie G February 4, 2017 at 7:38 pm Reply

    Beautifully penned. Thank you for visiting the English side of the blog http;//visualpoetrysylvieg.wordpress.com 🙂

  • Rob February 5, 2017 at 4:12 pm Reply

    I’m not always a fan of olden day language usage in modern poetry, but with this subject matter it works very nicely! Not easy to pull off without sounding like a dictionary, you managed it well.

    • Sahil Bhambri February 6, 2017 at 3:27 am Reply

      Thanks a lot rob,
      I really respect your appreciation,
      The old touch is always good, it keeps up reminding about the past,
      Thank you once again 🙂
      God bless 🙂

  • shoreofsanity February 6, 2017 at 1:48 am Reply

    The dilapidated syntax really portrays the anguish of your words. Nicely done!

    • Sahil Bhambri February 6, 2017 at 3:26 pm Reply

      I am really glad to hear that,
      Thank you
      God bless 🙂

  • tamaraknowsbestblog February 9, 2017 at 5:52 am Reply

    This is beautiful well written! I <3 it!!

  • Mani February 14, 2017 at 4:24 pm Reply

    This is amazing!👏

  • closetwriter February 17, 2017 at 4:09 pm Reply

    A little sad but truly beautiful.

    • Sahil Bhambri February 17, 2017 at 5:42 pm Reply

      Glad that you relate
      Thank you
      God bless 🙂

  • Letters That Matter February 21, 2017 at 4:21 pm Reply

    Beautiful!!!

    Check out my space also to experience the magic of letters!!!

    Hope you will like it:)

  • Benjamin Merrell March 7, 2017 at 3:44 pm Reply

    Okay, this is straight up Shakespearean.

    • Sahil Bhambri March 7, 2017 at 9:53 pm Reply

      Whoa, shakespearen, i don’t really think that i’ve reached there yet, but you’ve made me insight that beautiful moment,
      I lived it
      Thanks a lot
      God bless 🙂

  • danielleskillings May 26, 2017 at 4:59 am Reply

    This was written so well. I’m not usually a fan of old-English but you really managed to pull it off.

    • Sahil Bhambri May 26, 2017 at 5:38 am Reply

      I am honoured to hear that,
      I succeeded in reaching out to you, to pull it off.
      Thanks lot😊
      Stay blessed 🙂

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