Benevolent enrichment and Subdue reticent voice are ample to slay.
Coruscating adroit eyes are waiting to say a lot with a broken trust , maybe?
She is endearing with a winsome smile, with a scrutiny in her heart for sun signs on this road of never ending miles.
Subtlety of her questions are pretty as she, like a dream , she lived again a bit.
Smells like caffeine , she is damn enslaving.
In a dreamland she lives, i am awake still i am waving.
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I write what i see, and feel what i breathe. Poetics, Realism is what i bathe in. Hope do i not that you see my words than just read?


  • hide June 18, 2016 at 2:45 pm Reply

    Lovely poem. I’ll try to continue it.

    But behind her facade is willing heart
    Wanting to love and trust again
    Someone who will treasure her words
    Just let her walls crumble in time
    You’ll see her as a whole
    As a person, as an angel, and as a wrecked woman
    You’ll see her as more than beautiful.

    I hope you don’t mind.

    • sahilbhambri June 18, 2016 at 4:53 pm Reply

      I am really glad that you got it, i din’t mind it, instead i am glad that yes, to see her walls crumble in time, i’ll know her more.
      Thanks for stating your point 🙂

      • hide June 19, 2016 at 8:31 am Reply

        No problem. 🙂

  • avid reader June 18, 2016 at 6:51 pm Reply

    I like your choice of words which helps says a lot with little. Love reading and re reading.

  • shambhavi31 June 19, 2016 at 8:35 pm Reply

    You have a great vocab! ^_^
    An exceptionally beautiful poem. I could see myself in your poem, sending waves of smile across my face in hours beyond midnight. 🙂

    • sahilbhambri June 20, 2016 at 2:39 am Reply

      Hey thanks a lot , chuffed that i can make someone smile at midnight thru my poem 🙂 .
      Keep smiling , god bless

      • shambhavi31 June 20, 2016 at 11:38 am Reply

        Ahaa! 😀 You’re welcome!
        Stay blessed!

  • yashvigupta July 3, 2016 at 11:21 am Reply

    You are amazing 👌

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  • heyduckling October 27, 2016 at 8:27 am Reply

    This is so beautiful . Thank you for liking my post btw . 🙂

    • sahilbhambri October 27, 2016 at 11:12 am Reply

      Thank you 🙂
      And you write good 🙂

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