Opaque..
Yet, dolour affirmed the fib,
Perfidiously died in a lap of autumn.
Help, help!
I am alive, seems like already forgotten.
Astrophil urged Stella,
Dirge of angst in a slur,
Wait , wait!
He hung fire for the love of her.
I try, i cry, yes i unfold, i die,
Let the darth befall,
Espy the pang,
Discern the Thanatos’s call.
As immortal as a song of Nightingale,
Every forest hast an anecdote,
Troth of murk,
In every word i wrote.
©reserved.
Beautifully written. “I try, I cry, yes I unfold, I die” 😍
Thank you arisha 🙂
God bless 🙂
You had me at “dolour affirmed the fib.” Treat your quill as mighty as it serves you, wonderful wordsmith.
Your appreciation is so amusing.
Thank you beautiful soul.
God bless 🙂
beautiful!
Thank you
God bless 🙂
Awesome poem, loved reading it, your style of writing is pretty epic I must say 👍
Thanks sophia,
Glad you stopped by and read it,
God bless 🙂
Superbly written.
Beautifully written and expressed…..seriously loved reading it……..choice words are really amazing…..😊😊
Thank you beautiful soul,
Your appreciation means a lot,
God bless 🙂
My pleasure………keep smiling….😊😊
Thanks for the reviews of my poems and I love this one it is so beautiful,thanks again God bless Anita
Thank you , Anita
You write beautiful too
God bless 🙂
You’re welcome and thank you
“I try, I cry , yes I Unfold , I die ” 😍Chilling!! Your work is pretty amazing.
Thank you for your beautiful appreciation.
God bless 🙂
Say whaaaa…. You have a very good voice when it comes to glossary of things. Rock on dude, rock on.
Thanks a lot dude,
Really appreciate it man
God bless 🙂
Extraordinary work; both smart and beautiful!
Wow, respect your admiration , means a lot
Thank you
God bless 🙂
Spins into rhythm yet with tranquility.
Utterly beautiful.
Thank you beautiful
You write amusing too,
God bless 🙂
wow… b-e-a-utiful…..its amazing..
Thank you so much,
You are amazing too,
God bless 🙂
Every forest has an anecdote 🙂 It noted down these words in my diary..touched.
Wow, glad to hear that nikita,
Thank you for showing up your appreciation,
God bless 🙂
Beautiful! Very very well penned.
Thank you akansha😊
You write beautiful too,
God bless 🙂
i especially like the surprise in the last two lines.
Thank you 🙂
God bless 🙂
Excellent style!
Thank you so much 🙂
Incredible, I must say.
Thank you, Niharika
God bless 🙂
Sometimes someone comes your way who makes you realize the astounding capacity of words to express a soul. It is then when overwhelm seizes your spirit and you dance on top of the dots and accents to a phonetic orchestra.
Your work calls for a book of poetry.
Thank you for visiting nothingcluelesslost.com
Thanks for appreciating ,
I respect your comment,
You are true there, and i will surely try for a book
Thanks
God bless 🙂
OMG, you’re such a great poet, with such an extraordinary style of writing!!
Keep up the good work!! 😊
That means a lot,
Respect that, waking up to this,
Thanks
God bless 🙂
Pleasure’s all mine. 😊
I have been reading out some of your stories and i can claim pretty nice stuff. I will surely bookmark your blog.
I really respect that appreciation,
Thank you 🙂
Glad that you liked my stuff,
God bless 🙂
I love the way you paint with words!
I loved the way you appreciated.
Thanks much (:
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