Unsheathed: an ode.

 

Amidst the tainted fibs,
Obliterated all the light,
Blood seeped through the nibs,
Perdition to forget the might.

Swim into a reverie,
Lost the first ebbs,
Gloom and arbitrary,
Sombre; spider webs.

Beneath is deep, i know, i know the story of a deer ; cried for the days of aliveness , ran and ran and ran to jump off the cliff, but caught by the mighty tiger : Died an undead death.

Reticent: her voice,
Blue lies in adroit love,
Coruscating : beaut eyes,
Hark to the saga of lost dove.

“Dark i am, in grave i live,
Let me fall without a why,
Some take, some give,
Some laugh, some die.”

©reserved.

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I write what i see, and feel what i breathe. Poetics, Realism is what i bathe in. Hope do i not that you see my words than just read?

19 Comments

  • GrenouilleFrenetique March 2, 2017 at 8:47 pm Reply

    This is a masterpiece. ❤❤ An unsheathing so full of expertise. I am at a loss for words.

  • -Eugenia March 3, 2017 at 10:27 pm Reply

    This is brilliant.

  • Ali Qureshi March 4, 2017 at 10:35 am Reply

    Keep it up! 🙂

  • Benjamin Merrell March 7, 2017 at 3:42 pm Reply

    LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS! Not only are there very trenchant and useful ideas here, but it also scans really well! I read it aloud and got goose-bumps, so you have achieved POETRY, and I am grateful.

    • Sahil Bhambri March 7, 2017 at 9:51 pm Reply

      Achieved POETRY, thats a huge laudation i could ever get, really.
      It gave me goosebumps while reading your comment,
      I respect your appreciation, glad that you read and liked them.
      Thanks a lot
      God bless 🙂

  • The Originals March 10, 2017 at 7:42 am Reply

    Beautiful composition…

  • Niharika Tanwar March 13, 2017 at 8:52 pm Reply

    Something is still missing and that’s appreciation. ✨Great word.

    • Sahil Bhambri March 14, 2017 at 1:55 pm Reply

      It was so beautiful, 🎈
      Thank you
      God bless 🙂

  • Jonathan Caswell March 20, 2017 at 6:54 pm Reply

    MAY I REBLOG THIS ODE SO BEAUTIFUL??? AND ANY TO FOLLOW OR PRECEED? 🙂

  • joberc March 21, 2017 at 1:48 am Reply

    LOVE THIS. Great job!

  • res1der April 2, 2017 at 8:34 am Reply

    Well done. I like your Ode. Very powerful.

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